Juho L - My Sad World (beta)

[Juho L]

I was just playing with piano and came up with that classic A-C#-A-C# -chord progression. Then I just refined it to end in D-Esus4-E-Fmaj7 and there we have a beautiful ballad. Of course when I had a ballad on my hands I needed sugar covered lyrics. So I wrote incredible lyrics with my colleague gentleman.

The official hymn of TIISTAI club. Based on this background (beta version): www.kolumbus.fi/juho.lepisto/BalladiKoko.mp3
Designed to be sung in yearning but hopeful manner with British accent.

My Sad World
composed: Juho L
lyrics: Juho L, JAK

Last time when I saw you were lonely
just like I'm alone right now
See the fear of loneliness in me
Come and help me out

Would you come to my sad world of rain
and drive these murky clouds away
would you be my sun and warm my soul?
Make me whole again

The strong emotions deep within me
Waving like a stormy sea
I'm a lonely ship in the dark
Show me your light.

All the day I feel this pain
Like something's tearing my heart away
Maybe I just need a gentle touch
oh, make it go away.

The story of my deepest feelings
no-one else feels the same for you
After you are resting here with me
I need no more
I need no more
I need no more
No more
I wish you would be resting here with me

[Hollowcell]

Very nice!

I'm looking forward to the vocals being put in.

[GeN]

Very nice chords and piano play overall. Sounds already moving even without the vocals. :)
*waiting for the full version*

[Tomer=Trance]

Very nice!

I'm looking forward to the vocals being put in.

same here :)

[BlueSwan]

Sounds very nice indeed!

[DIGITAL SCREAMS]

Hehe

Those lyrics are distinctly Gary Numanesque! Does anyone here like GN? BTW Juho I cant d/l ur mp3! It isnt there any more :(

DS

[DIGITAL SCREAMS]

Hehe

Those lyrics are distinctly Gary Numanesque! Does anyone here like GN? BTW Juho I cant d/l ur mp3! It isnt there any more :(

DS