Track made with virus!

[psynpose]

Hi, not sure if this should go here but nevermind! Here's a track I've just written with the virus for all parts apart from the drums. Let me know what you think, and feel free to sign the guestbook on my site!

http://www.psynposemusic.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/mp3/Psynpose%20Music%20-%20shining.mp3

cheers

Pete

[psynpose]

No one going to comment on my track or website? Go on I'll make it worth your while!

Cheers

Pete

[Hollowcell]

I'll be waiting until I get on the work connection. Be patient.

Out of interest how will you make it worth our while? :D

[baldo]

just listened to your tune. in what genre would you classify the song? dance-electronica.

i like the changeups along the way. @ 4:08 it goes back and restarts then stays dynamic to the end.

how many tracks in the song?

do you prefer using presets or your own sounds?

thx for the tune.

[DIGITAL SCREAMS]

Definitely some early 80's influences here! The first 1.50 mins has a definite John Carpenter feel to it. Do you like his films/music? I do!

Minimilist track for the most part.....have you tried whacking in some fat stabby chord sequences...rather than overly rely on monophonic parts? Some of the sounds work well together. Personally, when I listen to this track I can hear some nice places to put some Prophet 5/Jupiter 8 stabs in.

Is the Virus your only synth?

Overall a I'd give this track a 5/10.....which aint too bad :)

Thanks for the listen.....

DS

[jasedee]

The overall sound is quite "dull".....but maybe that is just my monitors interpretation

I like some of your leads...very aggressive and dirty!

Im not really into this type of music, so it is hard for me to give an unbiased opinion.....I quite like the breakdown section, where you bring in an electro break style beat. All the filter/cutoff/resonance stuff is cool...

Pretty cool track.

Jason

[hankdennemann]

I love this track. I agree, it sounds muddy on my speakers as well. Nothing a little bbe can't fix.

--Hank

[xerxes_]

i think all that is needed is a bit of EQ on each part in order to set them apart.. other than that i think this production is fine.

keep it up!

.x

[Hollowcell]

Listening now..

Interesting compostion, with some 80s influence for sure.

Really like some of your synth sounds too - the lead sound at about 3 minutes is great.

Do agree with some of the comments regarding production, but in general it's not bad - just needs a little fine tunning.

Thanks for the listen.