Juho's unfinished business

[Juho L]

Two unfinished tracks.

www.juho-lepisto.com/Ska.mp3

A small ska punk track. Quick demo. The lead in the chorus will be replaced by vocals & brass.

www.juho-lepisto.com/Monsters.mp3

If David Bowie would be dead he would be turning in his grave. Sounds weirdly bassy and 90's trackerish.

Both tracks are really rough and hideous soundwise. I made them on SoundBlaster with half-broken Sony headphones wo I have no idea on the mixing and balance. I'm a bit stuck with both of those tracks. All ideas and comments are welcome.

[DIGITAL SCREAMS]

LOL Juho im enjoying these :wink:

Can we try and use some 80's synth brass?

DS

[Merlot]

liked the ska track. the intro needs to go in my opinion. It sounds like a john mayer buble gum pop track at first. I would just start with that nasty bass :-) and start adding elements from there and keep the temp up.

Good job!

[Juho L]

Can we try and use some 80's synth brass?

Sure thing... Ahahahahahahaha!

[Analog Warriors]

we like both tracks ... the ska track brings happy, sunny fealings to me & my mate 8)

finish them Juho ... tap the full potential, we'd like to hear the complete tracks !!!

[Onkel Dunkel]

Ska: I agree with Merlot; the intro has to go. Besides that i like it :D
Monsters: Very nice. I really like this one :D Maybe a bit to dark and muffled. Could you make it sound a bit brighter?

[Hollowcell]

I can't seem to get the links to work. I try save-as but it comes back as if I'm trying to save a HTML doc. Is there something I'm missing or have you taken them down?