New track: Generator

[pseudonym]

Hi folks,

I started this tune last year, and then had to cancel my life for the game I've been making.

I've got back to it now though, and would appreciate some comments/tips on the mix and arrangement.

It's not finished, as it currently only goes just past the first breakdown. The rest of the track is in my head...

http://www.electroniclife.co.uk/pseudonym/Generator.mp3

It's mostly TI, with Absynth, JP and SuperCollider programming...

cheers!

pseudo

[pseudonym]

no comments :(

is it that bad/good?


I've got a new mix up here: http://futurlab.blogspot.com/

Any comments appreciated!

[Tomer=Trance]

Hmmm trance i didnt know your into that,i pictured you more as a Indie rock guy... :mrgreen:

The tune sounds great,im missing maybe a repeative melody line in the corus part.
Very fat sounds :wink:

Tomer.

[pseudonym]

:D

I'm a trance, prog house, anything atmospheric kinda guy :)

It needs a melody to transition into the valve sound, and then I've written a breakdown with some sci-fi minor chords... I've got a friend visiting this weekend so I can't work on it - but hopefully will be finished soon now that I've got the mix sorted. Mixing has been something of a mystery until recently.

Cheers for listening!

Where's your music at?

[Tomer=Trance]

Im working on some minimal techno - electronic right now.
I know what you mean about mixing,only now after doing tons of mixes and alot of reading i feel like i accualy geting close to know what im doing :mrgreen:

[jasedee]

Sounds sweet!

That kick is large, I like the moody feel and and atmosphere's you've created.

[pseudonym]

great, thanks guys :)

[Loose Grip]

Nice dark sound, and dark vibes :) The kick sounds a bit hollow, or muddy... A more tech-trance, Sander Van Doorn styled beat would also have suited this song really nicely. Nice name for the song by the way. It really reminds me of some electric generator just about to pop a fuse :) Nicely done.

[F5D]

The kick is a little booming but otherwise I like the dark mood of the track. :)