I dunno if its my speakers or my tastes or what.. but agh.. replace that bass drum :) Its way too thin and poppy. Thats just my opinion though, you might like it :p

I like the track though, especially the efx you have there already and the vocal effect is good. The breakdown in the middle is just right.

Keep it up!

thx m8! that bass drum has changed at least 3 or 4 times before i put that one :) i think i still have to change it tho...