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Removed but thanks for advice guys :D :D

Ok:

The 'intro'-part isn't the best - what you should do here is acctually cut that down. say a; reversed crash, kick + crash and add the hihats directly.

It feels that it are missing a bass-sound here; but i do like the airy feel of this track. Nice work the panning. The melody is nice and i do like that 'whistle'-effect.

I am really tired and i'll get to you with some better comments on the track later today mate.

(I could just add that, my speakers isn't the best either so i can go wrong with it's missing bass and so on)

OK...

Yeah, with the Intro, It would have been cool to start with the kick with maybe a High pass filter or something, and slowly building to original sound....

Panning etc is cool.....things flying around! Nice little builds/breaks....

Sounds like a nicely produced track....dark undertone, which I like...Oooh....cool build!

I reckon more bottom end with the kick....seems lacking in this area in general.

Cool track!!!!