You chopped the sample up really well Fasttracker! Sounds cool mate. For those of you interested in listening to the original sample, it's the "heavyelectronic2" MP3 on my soundclick.
Now to the track itself.
First off, I really like the way you chopped up the sample. It sounds much better than the way I played it when I recorded that demo. The structure with the synths and stuff is pretty cool too. Maybe the only sound I didn't like was starting off bass-bell kinda thing.
Drums - This track needs a big beat breaks drum line. You could beef the drums up in the mastering stage heaps, but layering some more hits before you master would make a pumping rhythm line. Having some harder snares and rides for the sections with the loud part of the heavyelectronic sample would be cool too.
Of course it's your baby mate. I'm just speaking from my person preference (which in a lot of cases isn't the same as everyone else
).
All up a cool track. I know I said it already, but I really liked what you did with that sample!