Listening to the mastered version.
First up I'll say it's quite a musical track. Strong structure and everything has been placed for a reason.
I think as far as mastering and production goes, it could do with a bit of work. Really though that's not the musicians concern overly, but if you are making demos then it kind of has to be a little.
The track shines through and that's the main thing.
Nice work and thanks for the listen.
