hey...not sure if this is how u want it to sound....
but i found......u need to mix it better.....some parts are drowned in distortion....
the drums are too roomy....too acoustic sounding with the rest of the electronic elements......
have u used distortion on all the parts or is the track clipped ??
apart from that...the music is nice...nice composition.....
its the technical aspects that need cleaning up.....
but if this is the sort of sound u are after..then ignore my comments....
good luck
