Bring on the doof. Sounding nice so far - though I reckon straight away you could slam the kicks and get it driving hard - harder to hear if you arent working on monitors but it feels a little flat. The clicky sub drop is a tad sharp perhaps in the transient too? Synth tones are generic rave but they sound good, could do with a little more life perhaps with some modulation etc. I reckon just focus on making it move around a bit more with your automation to help keep the track fresh.
This brings me back to my first underage raves and a certain substance
