Gods own child :
The drums need re doing i think, a lot of phasing in the hihats/cymbals and the kik and snare are lost in each other.
I would work on seperating the drum tracks (if recorded seperately, trak 1 kik/track2 snare...and so on). Use some eq and compression.
The vocals are nice maybe some mild reverb to create some space.
Listening the drums are just not snappy or punchy.
Your main problem is the percussion audio capture.
Good luck
Im just enthusiastic...never claim to be a pro. Just my opinions.