Your sound and production are good. The mixdown could be a bit clearer and less busy.
On the composition side, you are making the same mistakes as me:
- your breaks are too long, without rhythmic element. So people can't dance during them.
- Your intro has no beat. If you are not famous and have no djs that can remix your track, there is fairly low chance to be played in clubs with no mixable intro and outro.
- your are directly playing minor chords on your arp melody, which can be annoying for a dj (circle of fifths). It is easier to stick with fundamental and fifth at the beginning and end to allow more keys to be mixed with (let's say you got a C minor track running on deck A that outros with only C and G notes, youll be able to mix it with F major, A minor, G major, G minor, F minor or Eb major on deck B). When you are not famous, make it easy to mix with.
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