White (House again :) )

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Hi Gen

Prefered the 2nd one as it was more up front.....although a little tiring on the ears! A bit bright maybe...

Ok I dont say this lightly...but I really think this track has commercial potential. The best Ive heared from u in my opinion. The track starts well. By about 50 secs in though...I was hoping to hear it go in a different direction....but just kept going on grrrr....with minimal variation. Im not sure about putting all that cut up stuff at the end...to me it just doesnt quite feel right. I find it difficult to make a proper suggestion to you....b'cos I myself am so noobie to music making.....but im just giving u my opinion for what its worth.

Umm....maybe HC or someone could articulate it better in musical jargon.

Suffice to say...I like the track

DS